寫給小蜜蜂的第一首詩（五言絕句）

----- Written on Saturday, Oct. 16, 2010 by Mookoo Liang for his first grandson, Little Bee, who will probably be born very soon in the following week as the doctor predicts. "Little Bee" (小蜜蜂) is a nick name for the baby, whose real name will be Liang Yi-Feng (梁益丰), because the last character of the nick name (蜂) and that of the real name (丰) are homophones.

寫給小蜜蜂的第一首詩（五言絕句）

宇宙誰能懂？

春秋自作工；

小園花簇簇，

只為迎新蜂！

數年後作者補註：有一說，此詩末句「犯三平」不妥，應改字
以吻合平仄格律；倒也不難改，改「迎」為「接」則符合
「仄仄仄平平」了。不過，若以現代標準漢語來朗讀，
仍多少覺得「迎新蜂」比「接新蜂」語意更妥
而語音（聲調）也更有 起 ~ 伏 ~~ 變化 ....

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